By Patrick Morgan and David Kidger

Three sisters walk different paths in search of the origins of their technology driven race.

Wednesday, 13 November 2019

Editing Part 2

We are now deep into the second phase of editing, sorting out the finer detail of the text. The structural edit threw up some issues, in particular with the measurement of time. With no night or day references we've had to invent a completly different method of referring to demoninations without throwing the reader (you guys) out of the story. We feel we've got this however the impact on the actual text is quite profound and the number of instances are significant. Some (a hand full at most) inevitably have been missed. 

Aside from a few points of clarity here and there, so far it's been a straightfowrard process with not much changing. 

We will keep you posted on progress. 

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